Here's my problem
The story sounds interesting, I just wish you would incorporate more of that into the animation. The bars and face and music is alright, it's cool...the loop could be longer and the animation should change up a bit, but overall I'd say it needs more work. I've never made a flash animation, so I don't know how long they take. But if say it took you a week to do that, then maybe spend two months on a flash animation to see how far into development you can get.
I really love this one. I'm actually skipping other songs now to listen to yours, because I think they're really good and have a lot of potential.
Hmm, what are you saying? Is that backwards? Oh well, here we go listening again.....
Love the guitar, everything sounds so good! It is very repetitive, but that's ok.
As for the bass line, haha, well I've probably heard that somewhere too, so what? It's a great bass line, and usually the artist's music as a whole is what people compare for originality, not a single instrument's line in a song. I say don't sweat it. Great tune!
What I think of V 1.0
Intro sounds pretty good. There's just that swell at 0:30 that seems to break up in the speakers, maybe you could mix it a little better. Is it moving from left to right and back to left? Sounds like it's shifting around. Maybe it's the volume at center that's causing the static, unless that's all on purpose. I'd say, ditch the crackly sound if you can.
Later in the song when the drums bit starts, it just seems to compound and I dunno, honestly sounds a bit messy. Don't misunderstand me though, this is a great track, and I really like all of it. Just try to smooth it out some, it sounds a bit clunky.
Towards the end with the guitar, man I wish there was a whole song with that going on, for another four minutes. Seriously I love the sound, it reminds me of the Satriani album with all the electronic effects. I can't wait to hear V 1.1 or 2.0 or whatever you're gonna call it. ^^
Pretty bouncy tune. Really liked the vocals and the lyrics the most, I think it worked really well in this type of song. Mixed very well, no complaints there. If I had to point out something that didn't make sense to me, it would be the bass sound in the intro. I'm not sure what it is about it, but I'll just say I wasn't expecting such a great song based on that sound I heard in the intro. :/ Maybe a clean bass sound would have worked better? Oh well. ^^ Keep on rocking.
Yeah, the bass DOES sound noobish in the beginning. I'll have to change that. Thanks for the review! :D
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